"Forbidden Snow" - Part II
Continued...
It was but a moment
that they had paused before plunging down the road. The road was nearly devoid
of any wayfarers for–excepting the few browned workmen traveling in groups from
one field to another–the people were all out in the fields at work upon their
assigned tasks. The town too was surprisingly quiet as they passed through its
narrow brick streets. No people lingered at the corners, but all were hurrying
to and fro, too much in haste to pass the time of day with a neighbor, though
even in their haste some did stare with interest at this new prisoner of the
Counselor.
* * *
When the palace
soldiers had leaped out to apprehend Tiana, the gnome had, with great presence
of mind, jumped into a hollow stump nearby and listening carefully had heard
from whence they came and what their plans were with her.
He was about to rise
from his hiding place when he felt a sharp tweak on his ear. With a shriek–and
looking up–he saw the snow fairy perched upon the edge of the stump.
“Ah, I thought it was
you. Who else would be sitting in stumps while allowing his lady to be
kidnapped?”
Popping out his brows,
bristling with indignation, he glared at the fairy who sat calmly upon the
stump, two tiny white hands around her knee. “I decided to retire until I found
a more opportune time to be of assistance to our lady.”
“Very correctly put,
Tomas,” she said. “You have clearly been communing with those in high places and
now, since you are the one that has gotten Lady Tiana into this spot, you will
have to get her out.”
“I...?”
“Yes–you–my gruff
little friend, you and your minstrel friend. Who–you must see now–was the
Prince Andre himself.”
“Well, that is too bad.
He was such a nice fellow,” he said, sniffing. “And I must say–little from you…!
What shall I do?”
“Must I do all the
thinking? But, my dear fellow, I am coming with you. You must carry me, for
this heat makes me dreadfully tired.”
And so the dainty little
fairy, wrapped in her lacy cloak, and the craggy gnome, with beard and boots,
started after the party going toward the palace.
* * *
Reaching the foot of
the hill of the palace, the party of men-at-arms began the assent of the brick
bordered road that snaked back and forth up the hillside. Bushy green trees
lined the road at regular intervals, their prickly green branches seeming to
warn off those who journeyed up the road.
The palace walls loomed
up cool and shadowy on this eastern side of the palace and heated as Tiana was
by the strenuous climb, she still felt almost cold in the shade of it. Upon the
hail of the captain the heavy and ornately carved gates were opened by those
within and the party without passed through. The company halted while the captain
briskly mounted the steps and vanished within the doors of the palace.
Tiana had a breath to observe
her surroundings. Her expression was one of curiosity as she looked about this
place which was once where she was to have lived. She found that she was in a
wide oblong courtyard bordered upon one side by the enormous many windowed
stone building whose wide walnut doors directly faced the gates. Lifting her
eyes she could see the sharp eaves and peaks amongst which she could see some
birds whisking about the roof haloed by the sun, far above her. A wide lane
which she guessed must lead to the stables, gardens, and servants quarters
disappeared to the right around the corner of the building.
The captain appearing
once more from within, he beckoned to the guards and, leaving the rest of the
soldiers in the courtyard Tiana, escorted by a soldier on either side of her,
mounted the wide flight of stairs. Inside she walked through an immense vaulted
hall still with the soldiers on either side, the sound of their boots upon the
stone floor sending the echoes crashing from wall to wall.
A large heavily carved
door rose at the end of the hall by which stood two men in armor. At the
approach of the soldiers and their prisoner the guards swung open the ponderous
doors. At the same time, a flood of light falling into the hall, the party
paused in the doorway. Leaning her head so that she might see about the captain
who stood before her, Tiana’s eyes were dazzled as she gazed into the room. The
immense wall to the left of the doors was totally made of windows, showing a
breathtaking view of the valley below. Directly opposite the doors was a
stately dais on which stood two heavy golden thrones– both empty–and placed
before the dais was a table hung with a richly embroidered cloth. Upon it in a
heavy golden stand was a clear globe in which swirled millions of twinkly
needle points of light.
Before the table their backs
to the door, stood two men. Upon their entrance, the elder and shorter slowly
turned. He was clothed in a long plum colored robe over which his curly red
beard fell downwards. His eyes were the shifting yellow of sand as they fell
upon the prisoner. In his hands was a staff, which clearly marked him the famed
and feared Counselor.
But Tiana's eyes had flashed
from him to his companion. She knew him. His jerkin and shirt were of a simple
cut and fabric, but the silver adorned hilt of a sword gleamed by his side and
he held his shoulders and head, with its clustering curly black hair, with easy
confidence.
“Prince Andre, do you
wish to see your prisoner?” the Counselor’s voice was silky and slid as
smoothly through the air as did the hem of his robe over the marble floor as he
approached Tiana.
The prince turned and Tiana’s
teeth snapped down on her lower lip so that a bead of blood appeared.
“What is her charge?” the
Prince asked.
“Seeking to overthrow
my–your kingdom, Your Majesty.”
“By what means? Surely
you do not expect me to think a simple maid is powerful enough to kill me?” Prince
Andre said, his voice was almost gentle, but there was a hint of mockery in the
low tone and the Counselor looked sharply at him.
“Not only the
profitability, but the very survival of this our–your kingdom–is bound by a
single secret, which if found and broken would snap the very effects of
nature.”
Tiana's voice was
silvery and distinct as she said, “You are mistaken, my Lord Counselor. That
has been done already.”
The Counselor shot
toward her and lifting his staff menacingly above her head, “You lie. I have
but improved nature.”
Spinning about he was
suave and submissive to the Prince as before, “But Your Majesty, if this secret
of which I spoke were to be smashed, we–the very rulers of this kingdom–would
be overthrown.”
“It would not be the
first time that those of royal blood have been banished from their just places,”
the Prince said, “or simply had their power usurped. The spell of power has not
been broken yet and I, at least, am as yet Prince. So I demand that you release
this maid.”
“You cannot know who
she is, my lord,” the Counselor said quickly, his eyes wary, flicking from
Andre to Tiana as he spoke. “She is a wicked outlaw. If once you allow her
freedom of this kingdom, your rule will never be sure.”
Prince Andre had been
standing, hands clasped behind him gazing outward over the vast spread of the
valley below, but his eyes were gleaming and to the Counselor, a dangerous
light sparkled in his eyes. “But what if I wish for a revolution? I have been
taught, my Lord Counselor, by other persons besides yourself and–though their
speech was perhaps less polished than thine–their words were of the truth. This
kingdom has burned too long under this eternal summer sun. I think it is time
that the people and the seasons are free once more. And I believe that the Lady
Tiana,” his eyes twinkling as he said it, “will not hinder that which is my
purpose.” His eyes flicking to Tiana's guards he said “Release the lady.”
The guards obeying his
orders Tiana stepped forward, her eyes sparkling. A smile flitted across her
face, but the Counselor seemed to verily shimmer with hatred as he listened to
the Prince’s words and though his voice was still smooth, a shiver of menace
pulsed through it as he spoke, “You are a fool, Andre. I bore the rule of your
father, but do you think I will allow my plans to be thwarted now? Never! My
strongest enchantments hold this land and do you think you can break them?
Despise my laws if you dare, but you would never dare to break something you do
not fully understand–and you do not truly understand this.”
The Prince’s steady
gaze wavered before the piercing glimmer of the Counselor, but Tiana stepped
forward, “Andre, I know the secret. Take courage, it is within your power to–”
The Counselor sprang
forward and with a shriek raised his staff to strike her, but the Prince–his
sword flashing in the crystal light of the globe–sprang before Tiana. “In some
ways you did my father great service and I am loath to kill you,” he said his
words hard and biting between his clinched teeth. “But you have done much cruel
injustice against my people, binding them to endless work in my name and I am
finished with you.”
The Counselor shrieked
to the guards to seize him, but they, standing openmouthed simply stared at him,
so extending his staff, point forward at Andre and Tiana–who stood slightly
behind him–he said, “I, too, am loath to do this to one who has served me well,
but you serve me no longer and–” He was cut off as the Prince sprang forward, his
sword dashing the staff to the ground.
Staggering sideways
with the Prince gripping the collar of his robe, the Counselor clutched at the
drapery upon the table. The enormous globe tottered then slid off the table and
with a sharp crash smashed upon the floor. The humid air was suddenly purified
by a sweep of cold breeze and the sparkles that had been within the globe
swirled upward–increasing and multiplying till the whole room was a blizzard of
swirling white. The windows springing open the white poured outward over the
courtyard: filling the air and sky, covering trees and fields and cottages.
* * *
Tomas and Sophia were
still plodding toward the palace, the fairy drooping lower upon the gnome’s
shoulder. He too was hot and perspiring.
“I not only feel sorry
for those peasants now,” muttered the gnome, “I positively agonize with them.
We must halt for a minute. You may be a very small fairy, but you are not a
feather.” Even as the words left his mouth a hushed wind swept over them.
Looking upward toward
the castle they could see a cloud of white that sparkled round the palace,
growing every moment until the white was swirling over the valley–a beauteous mist
over the land.
“The spell is broken,
Tomas,” Sophia cried, suddenly flitting from his shoulder.
Abruptly the road was
full of rejoicing people surging round them. Tomas, capering with delight–all
weariness banished from his mind–caught hands with two children and joined in a
wild dance.
* * *
The Prince staggered to
his feet, the blood from where he had cut his hand upon the glass dripping unheeded.
Tiana flew toward him. “Andre,
Andre! His rule is truly finished. You and this whole land are freed.” Her face
was full of sparkling light.
He took her hand and
together they laughed with pure joy. Swarms of cheering villagers and
townspeople could be glimpsed mounting the road leading to the castle between
the disagreeable needle-pointed trees, now rapidly turning into things of
rounded beauty.
“Let us go out to meet
them,” Andre said. “But wait,” he turned back, “the Counselor.”
“No, Andre, look,”
Tiana said, pointing to the place where lay the shards of the crystal globe.
“When the globe–in which all his power was bound up–fell and shivered to pieces,
he melted. See there is nothing left of him but his broken staff.”
They stood looking down
at the broken staff.
“Both he and his spells
have vanished forever,” Andre said. Turning he suddenly swept her up, spinning
her about in the flakes that swirled about them. “And now is the time to
rejoice and be merry, my lady Tiana. Let us go out to meet those who will soon
be your people, too.”
He set her down his
face merry and teasing, and once more joining hands they ran out through the
great doors into the pure, drifting white of the courtyard.
The
End
Story Copyright © 2013 by Éowyn
Peterson
Bravo! Beautiful ending!! (Claps hands here)
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ReplyDeleteAnna and Natalie - Thank you so much for your kind comments! :-)
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ReplyDeleteThank you Natalie! And, I think you did an amazing job on all the buttons for the party!
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Thank you!
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